Jumat, 27 Desember 2013

THE SECRET OF LITTLE FINGER (narrative)




THE SECRET OF LITTLE FINGER

       Once upon a time, there lived an empire family in the kingdom. After a few years ,the King and his queen had a daughter. The princess was named Josset. Princess Josset grew into a beautiful and kind girl. It made her parent more loved her. Princess Josset was famous until another land as a perfect girl. At the time, king wanted his daughter to got married .

       Many princes from many lands wanted to got married with princess Josset, and they fighted each other to got her love. King gave many challenges for theme. As the result, they were 3 prince who  had choosen. King asked to her daughter to decided who would be her husband. Princess Josset was confuse, and she had idea. She choosed one of her fingers and hiden it on the back. After that, the princes guessed and pointed which finger maybe same with her. first prince was wrong because pointed his thumb. Second prince pointed his forefinger, it also wrong finger. When the third prince, he pointed his little finger. Actually, princess Josset showed what finger she hiden and it same with third prince,it was little finger. That prince’s name was Barnabas. At the time, princess Josset and prince Barnabas were love each other. They fastened their little finger and promised to keep faithful until died. Their wedding party was very royally. Everyone was happy and gave blessing for them.

       One day, the war was happened in that land. King ordered his son in law, prince Barnabas to leaded the war. Princess Josset was very worried to let his husband did it. But, prince Barnabas just asked  his wife made a promised to always wait him. Princess Josset agreed and they promised each other, then they fastened their little finger to binden their promised. After two days, the war was finish and that kingdom won it. But, one of soldier appraised that prince Barnabas was died in the war. Princess Josset very sad when heard it. Every day she always cried. King and queen so sad when looked their daughter. They had planed to searched new husband for princess Josset. She just followed what her parent want. There was a prince applied to marry her. She just pointed her little finger. The prince did not understand about that and he put a ring in princess josset’s little finger. She threw it and cried. Suddenly, a mysterios man who weared a alb was entered the kingdom to met princess Josset. She assumed that he also wanted to had her. she pointed her little finger and the man replied it. they fastened his little finger each other. Princess Josset was surprised. The man opened his alb and made everyone surprised. He was prince Barnabas. Princess Josset was very happy, she believed her husband would came back to her.

       In the midnight, princess Josset woke up from her sleep. She saw prince Barnabas opened the window and she came to him. Prince barnabas said that he had died actually. He came again just to fulfilled his promised to came back from the war and asked to princess Josset to not sad again. He also wanted to said goodbye to his beloved wife, princess Josset. She didn’t belived it. 

       In the morning, she saw Barnabas’s carcase was arounded. King and queen tried to firm their daughter. Princess Josset knew that his husband really died. Suddenly, she killed herself and died too. She fulfilled her promised to faithful until they were died. Finally, they were died together. It was the power of love and faith with the little finger.



Inspirited by : someone who ask me why some people fasten their little finger when make a promise.


5 komentar:

  1. i think you should choose the most interested title to make reader interesting in your story...

    BalasHapus
  2. wow great story..
    i like this story..
    it gave me some inspiration to me..
    please post more heheh

    BalasHapus
  3. Hmmm that good story sist... develop your idea,,

    BalasHapus
  4. thanks for your comments guys.. :)

    BalasHapus